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Post by Dachan-da (shiznit) on Sept 27, 2009 3:40:29 GMT -6
I love the Evil Dead films. So to celebrate here is the thread were you can chat all things Evil dead (script coming!)
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Post by Dachan-da (shiznit) on Sept 27, 2009 3:43:42 GMT -6
SCENE CODING
Interior - I Exterior - E Day - D Night - N Twilight - T
LOCATION CODING
CAR - Car B - Bridge CAB - Surrounding area outside cabin W - Woods M.R. - Main Room D.R. - Dining Room K - Kitchen C - Cellar W.S. - Work Shed L.B. - Linda's Bedroom S.B. - Shelly's Bedroom C.B. - Cheryl's Bedroom B.T.R- Bathroom
EXAMPLE
12 ID - D.R.
TRANSLATION
Scene #12, Interior, Day, Dining Room
1 ED - W
Something evil is lurking deep withing the wooded moun- tains of Tennessee, and the camera takes its point of view. Rising from a swampy bog, the mud slides from view allowing it to see early morning mist hanging about the forest. Creeping silently past trees, gliding over small shrubs, it moves onward through the woods until a mammoth oak rests directly in its path. The tree is uprooted by this unseen force, and falls with a deafening crash.
2 ED - CAR
Near by, a stretch of highway curves along the base of a mountain. The road winds off into oblivion beyond other peaks. From behind view, the rumble of an engine can be heard. It is a large logging truck headed south. Moving away, the truck becomes smaller until finally it disap- pears in the distance. From where the truck emerged, a dilapidated gold 1973 Oldsmobile comes into view.
3 ID - CAR
Inside, five people can be seen. They are couples ASHLY and LINDA, SCOTT and SHELLY, and CHERYL, ASHLY's sister. Both SCOTT and SHELLY wear "Michigan State" T-shirts, and are students along with the others at that univer- sity. SCOTT is driving and SHELLY sits next to him up front. ASHLY, LINDA and CHERYL are in back. They listen to an old "Baby Moses And The Thrillers" song on the radio, and SHELLY is slapping the dash board as if it were a drum.
SHELLY
(Singing with the music)... Together, forever...
SCOTT
Ash, where are we?
ASHLY
I'll tell ya in a second. Now we're still on seventy-five just past the county border...
4 ED - W
Once again, the camera takes the point of view of the dark and brooding force which stops atop a forest ridge to peer downward. Its view focuses upon the 1973 Olds- mobile speeding along the narrow highway below.
5 ID - CAR
ASHLY traces a route on the map with his finger.
ASHLY
...Which would put us...which would put us...
SCOTT
Jesus Christ, just tell us already will ya?
ASHLY zeroes in on the map with his finger.
ASHLY
...Right...
SCOTT is growing impatient.
ASHLY
...Right...
SCOTT
Yes?
ASHLY
Here!
Suddenly, the radio stops, and the steering wheel jerks from SCOTT's hand.
6 ED - CAR
The car screetches out of control into the opposite lane. A large oncoming tanker truck with its horn screaming races toward the car on a collision coarse.
7 ID - CAR
SHELLY
Scotty, watch out!
8 ED - CAR
The truck races closer.
9 ID - CAR
Their steering wheel is locked.
ASHLY
Turn!
10 ED - CAR
At the last possible instant, SCOTT's wheel again can be controlled, and the car swerves sharply back into its own lane.
11 ED - CAR
The truck speeds harmlessly past them.
12 ID - CAR
ASHLY
Damn it Scott, what the hell was that? You trying to kill us?
SCOTT
Don't yell at me, it's your lousy steering wheel. The damn thing jerked right out of my hand.
ASHLY
I can't understand it. I just had this thing in for a tune-up.
SHELLY
Radio's dead too, ace.
ASHLY
And I just had 'em tune up the whole thing yesterday.
SCOTT
Well, then take it back 'cause the damn thing don't work. Only thing that works on the whole car is the lousy horn.
SCOTT honks the horn.
13 ED - CAR
Several local MEN walking down the highway respond to the horn by waving.
14 ID - CAR
SCOTT yells out the window at them.
SCOTT
Aw, go to hell, I'm not waving at ya!
He looks in the rear view mirror. The MEN are still wav- ing in the distance. SCOTT turns back to drive.
SCOTT
Jesus Christ.
SHELLY turns around in the front seat and holds up a pint of Scotch.
SHELLY
Well, I'd like to make a toast. To Scott who almost killed us.
SCOTT
Aw, eat shit and die will ya?
SHELLY and the others laugh.
SHELLY
Okay, okay- then to a wild week-end in a wonderful cabin with good friends, (She glances at SCOTT) provided we live that long.
SHELLY cooly drinks from the Scotch and passes the bottle back to ASHLY and LINDA. ASHLY pours LINDA a drink in the bottle cap and keeps the bottle. They raise their drinks.
ASHLY and LINDA
...With good friends.
They toast, drink and react to the strong liquor. ASHLY tries to hide his reaction to the Scotch in front of LINDA, since SHELLY had reacted so calmly. ASHLY passes the bottle to CHERYL who stops him with a polite "No, thank you," then back up front to SCOTT.
LINDA
Hey Scotty, what's this place like anyway?
SCOTT
Well, the guy that's renting it says it's an old place, little run down, but it's right up in the mountains- totally secluded. (He takes a drink from the bottle) Best part is, we get it so cheap.
LINDA
Why are we getting it so cheap?
SCOTT
I don't know, might be in real bad shape.
CHERYL
You mean nobody's seen this place yet?
SCOTT
Not yet.
ASHLY
Might not be too bad.
LINDA
No...
ASHLY
Actually, it might be very nice.
LINDA
Yeah...
SHELLY
It's probably a real pit.
CHERYL
I can't believe that we're renting a place for a week-end that nobody's seen.
SCOTT
(Mumbling to himself) Jesus Christ, not this again...
CHERYL
(Turning to ASHLY) You know, mom and dad would never let us go up to a place like this if they knew-
ASHLY
-Which is exactly why they don't know. I'll tell you who I am gonna call. The guys that fixed up this car.
15 ED - CAR
The car approaches an exit along the highway.
16 ID - CAR
ASHLY glances at the map again.
ASHLY
Hey, I think this is where we get off.
17 ED - CAR
The car turns off the main highway and follows several back roads until it approaches a narrow dirt lane that winds upward along a twin set of mountains.
18 ID - CAR
SCOTT glances up to the peaks.
SCOTT
These mountains seem familiar.
LINDA
What do they remind you of? Some- thing majestic? Adventure?
SCOTT
Yeah, more like adventure.
LINDA
Any adventure in particular?
SCOTT
Shelly's sweater.
ASHLY and SCOTT laugh out loud. LINDA laughs quietly, and CHERYL lets out an embarassed giggle to herself.
SHELLY
(Teasing) Oooh, you're gonna get it Scotty, when you least expect it, you're gonna get it good.
19 ED - B
Finally, the car arrives at a wooden bridge extending over a great chasm. Carefully, the vehicle crosses.
20 ED - CAB
It is late afternoon when they eventually arrive at their destination. The small wooden cabin is surrounded by thick dark woods. SCOTT shuts off the car but it contin- ues to sputter and backfire.
21 ID - CAR
ASHLY reacts to his car.
ASHLY
I...I sent 'em a check for the tune-up. but I'm just not paying for it.
LINDA
This place is perfect.
CHERYL
The woods come awfully close to the house don't they?
SCOTT
So what's wrong with the woods, they can't bite ya.
CHERYL
It's just a little claustrophobic that's all.
LINDA
Well, I think it's beautiful.
SHELLY
Me too, it's gonna be a bomb week- end.
22 ED - CAB
SCOTT moves to the front door of the cabin where he finds a small ring of keys concealed on the shelf above the door. ASHLY unloads the car to the others.
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Post by Dachan-da (shiznit) on Sept 27, 2009 3:44:21 GMT -6
SCOTT
It's supposed to be one of these on here.
After trying several keys, he is able to unlock the door.
23 ID - M.R.
The interior of the cabin is completely dark. SCOTT opens the door and stands silhouetted in the doorway for a moment, then enters to find the light switch. The illumination reveals floors, walls, and ceilings made of cedar. There are two small bedrooms, a kitchen, and the main room which contains a stone fireplace set into the wall. An old grandfather clock stands silently in one corner, partially hidden in the shadows. A door in the rear of the cabin leads to a small work shed containing a work bench and an assortment of tools upon the wall. Located centrally in the main room is a trap door leading to the cellar. This catches SCOTT's eye.
SCOTT
Hey, this place has a dungeon.
CHERYL puts down a case of art supplies, and moves over to SCOTT by the trap door. He unlocks a chain securing the trap door with one of his keys and hands the ring to SHELLY.
SCOTT
Put these back will you?
SHELLY leaves with the keys, and SCOTT tries to open the hatch but cannot.
SCOTT
They nailed it shut.
CHERYL
Good, I don't like cellars. Probably just some garbage down there anyways.
SCOTT
Cheryl, they don't nail garbage in cellars. I mean it's not going to try and get out or anything.
CHERYL
Well, what's down there?
SCOTT
Well, could be any number of things. Old baseball cards, mushrooms, dead bodies-
LINDA
Hey, look at this!
LINDA is standing in the corner next to the old grand- father clock. She repositions a balance weight, and it begins to tick.
LINDA
Ta daaaaaa!
The others applaud and whistle. LINDA smiles.
24 ET - CAB
The cabin is seen from the outside. Twilight has come.
25 IT - M.R.
CHERYL sits alone in the living room near the window. She is drawing sketches of the old clock. As she works, the ticking stops unexpectedly. CHERYL puts down her pencil and looks up to the clock. It stands silently in the cor- ner with its hands frozen in position. There is a rust- ling from the woods. CHERYL looks out the window but can see only the trees. Something is moving outside, yet re- mains hidden within the forest. A gust of wind fills the room. CHERYL glances down at her hand. It turns a pale white and begins to shake and jerk about uncontrollably. She stares on incredulously as her hand, guided by some unseen force picks up the pencil and begins to sketch a figure upon her pad. The wind gales through the open window but dies down slowly as her hand completes the drawing. Whatever was at the edge of the woods has now retreated further into them. Her hand loses the pale cast and is now under control once more. CHERYL picks up her pad of paper. The likeness of a book with some form of ancient writing on its cover has been sketched. She looks to the woods which are now silent. A snapping of wood is heard from the cellar. CHERYL quickly turns to the trap door still nailed shut in the floor. Pos- sibly just a mouse, but she fixes her gaze upon it. Another sound, almost like faint breathing comes from the cellar.
26 IT - K/M.R.
ASHLY and LINDA enter from the kitchen. ASHLY is drink- ing a beer and moves over to CHERYL. He stands between her and the trap door.
ASHLY
What're you drawing Cheryl?
He picks up the piece of paper. LINDA looks over his shoulder to glance at it.
CHERYL
I...I don't know.
ASHLY
Is it a bible?
CHERYL
No, no it's no bible. (She glances again at the cellar, knowing some- thing is down there) I don't know what it is.
LINDA
Well, this one of the clock's not bad.
LINDA picks up the sketch and walks over to the clock with it a few steps away. She stands comparing it to the real thing with her back to CHERYL and ASHLY. She is only a few inches from the trap door, and CHERYL wants to call out in warning when ASHLY kneels in front of her to speak secretly.
ASHLY
(In a whisper) I got it right here.
He taps something in his shirt pocket. CHERYL is looking past him paying no attention. She watches only LINDA's feet, waiting for whatever is in the cellar to grab them. LINDA looks at the drawing in comparison.
LINDA
Cheryl, this is really good. I like how you did the numbers in that wood- ish style.
ASHLY produces a small box from his shirt and opens it quickly to show CHERYL. It contains a gold pendant on a necklace. LINDA takes a step closer to the clock. She is now standing almost upon the trap door. Although nailed shut, it opens slightly, pulling the nails with it. CHERYL gasps. ASHLY is pleased with her response.
ASHLY
(Still in a whisper) I knew you'd like it.
Quickly, he places it back in his shirt and touches his lips with a finger to indicate the secrecy of his sup- rise. LINDA returns with the sketch and places it back on CHERYL's small drawing table.
LINDA
It's really good Cheryl. Very close to the origional.
CHERYL
(In a relieved whisper) Yes, very close.
LINDA
I'm gonna check dinner.
LINDA returns to the kitchen and ASHLY turns to CHERYL.
ASHLY
You better get washed up. I'll see ya in there.
He winks, then follows LINDA into the kitchen. CHERYL again looks at the cellar. Slowly, from her point of view, the camera moves in toward the trap door, wait- ing...waiting.
27 IT - K
A blender screams as it mixes up a drink in the kitchen. SHELLY shuts it off and carries it to the dining room.
28 IT - D.R.
She joins the others who are now seated at the dinner table and serves the mixture. SCOTT sits between LINDA and CHERYL. He leans over to CHERYL.
SCOTT
(In a whisper) Dead bodies in the cellar, dead bodies in the cellar...
CHERYL
Will you stop it?
LINDA
Scott, leave her alone will ya?
SCOTT turns toward LINDA.
SCOTT
Will you relax, I'm just kidding around. She can take a joke-
He stops talking as he hears the trickling of water. He turns to see CHERYL finish pouring a glass of water in his lap. The others laugh. SCOTT is silent for a moment, then begins chuckling to himself. He turns to CHERYL.
SCOTT
(Jokingly) I'll get ya.
With a napkin, he blots the water from his pants.
SCOTT
I'll get ya for this Cheryl.
ASHLY stands with his drink and raises the glass.
ASHLY
I'd like to make a toast for all here this evening. As a greek friend of mine once said, "Nis-hat-nis-fert- dis-ruben-tu-tar-im."
LINDA
Which means?
SCOTT
Party down!
The laughter is stifled by a loud snap and cracking of wood heard from the main room.
SCOTT
What the hell...
All stand from the table and hurry to the main room.
29 IN - M.R.
The nails that held down the trap door have been ripped out, and although still in tact, the hatch is wide open. They stand silently in front of it, looking blank as to what could have done this. CHERYL is slighly more nervous than the others. ASHLY is the first to speak.
ASHLY
(Slowly) What is this?
SCOTT
Whatever it is, it's still down there.
CHERYL
I don't like cellars, let's close it up. (She does not want to deal with it) It's probably just some animal.
SCOTT
An animal?! An an...ha-ha-ha-ha-ha- that's the stupidest thing I ever heard in my life. Jesus Christ.
SCOTT locates a flashlight and peers into the hole. He traces the old wooden steps into darkness with his light.
LINDA
Maybe it is just some animal.
SCOTT
Yeah, probably right. It's probably just some animal. Uh...Cheryl, why don't you make sure.
He hands the flashlight to CHERYL who quickly gives it back.
CHERYL
Scotty, I'm not going down there!
SCOTT
Okay, okay you cowards, I'll go.
LINDA
Scotty don't. You're crazy if you go down there. Why don't you wait until morning.
SCOTT
Look, I'll be all right.
SHELLY
What melodrama! What courage! A kiss my brave hero.
SCOTT kisses SHELLY and with flashlight in hand, he descends the narrow steps into the cellars blackness.
SHELLY
I, your virgin queen eagerly await the precious moment when you will ascend.
SCOTT
Virgin queen?! Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-
He disappears below the floor. SHELLY, CHERYL, LINDA and ASHLY wait above.
ASHLY
(Calling down) Hey Scott, see any- thing?
There is no answer.
ASHLY
Hey Scott!...Scott!
SHELLY
He's just kidding around.
There is silence.
SHELLY
Isn't he?
No sounds come from the cellar.
ASHLY
Linda, get me a flashlight.
LINDA That's the only one we brought up.
ASHLY spots a lantern on the fireplace mantle.
ASHLY
Then get that lantern.
LINDA brings it over. ASHLY opens the kerosene valve, lights the wick, and descends into the basement.
30 IN - C
Down below, ASHLY moves quietly past the old stone walls and wooden beams which support the main floor above. In front of him stands an old door which leads to another section of the cellar. Cautiously, he moves toward it. Before he can touch it, the door swings open slowly with a moan. ASHLY moves through the doorway and deeper into the cellar. Condensation from water pipes above turn the cellar into an echo chamber as drips fall into shallow pools on the dirt floor below. As ASHLY scans with his light, he spots a shadow move out the corner of his eye.
ASHLY
Scott?
ASHLY breaks into a cold sweat as he moves away from the area where the shadow passed. He backs sqarely into a pair of arms which grab him.
ASHLY
Ahhhhhhh!
It is only SCOTT behind him.
ASHLY
What the hell are you doing down here, jerkin' off? How come you didn't answer me?
SCOTT
When?
ASHLY
Just now, I mean upstairs.
SCOTT
I didn't hear you.
ASHLY
Oh well, did you find anything?
SCOTT
Uh-uh.
ASHLY
What's this?
SCOTT sweeps his light to another corner and reveals several items atop a small table. Beneath a dusty cloth, he finds a book which appears to be covered in some sort of animal hide, with an ancient form of writing on the cover. Along with this book, SCOTT and ASHLY uncover a reel to reel tape recorder, an ancient dagger, and other parapanalia including a box of rifle shells.
31 EN - CAB
It is evening as darkness surrounds the small cabin.
32 IN - M.R.
The group sits huddled around the fireplace talking quietly about school. The same bottle of Scotch is passed around. ASHLY is rewinding the tape recorder, and once this is done, he turns it on. The voice of an old man is heard. ASHLY turns to the others who are talking.
ASHLY
Shhh, listen to this.
VOICE
My name is Julian Knowby. I am a pro- fessor of ancient Egyptian mythology in Dextin university's ancient history department...
ASHLY
This is the tape I found downstairs.
VOICE
(Continuing)...I am recording this entry from a small cabin in the south- ern mountains of Tennessee. Here, I am staying with my wife for a few weeks so that I may continue my research un- disturbed. Since May, a group of assoc- iate professors and myself have been excavating the ruins of Ca'n Dar. I
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Post by Dachan-da (shiznit) on Sept 27, 2009 3:45:03 GMT -6
believe I have made an important find in that area, and thus the reason for this log. With it, I can keep an ac- curate record of translations from my latest find; the first of six, the others still lost, volumes of ancient Sumarian burial practices and rites. Basically, it is a book of do's and don'ts dealing with the deceased en- titled "Naturan Demanto" roughly trans- lated "Book Of The Dead." It is bound in human flesh, and inked with blood of the deceased...
SCOTT
Jeez, I'd hate to find out what they used for pens.
VOICE
(Continuing)...This particular volume deals with demons and demon resurrect- ion. These are of the Katardi family, meaning those forces believed to inhab- it the jungles and woods of man's do- main. The first few pages that I have translated warn that these demons are dangerous, everpresent, and exist primarily through this book. As legend has it, only the sacred high priests of the Ca'n Dar tribe could posess these books, for they alone could properly control the resurrected de- mons. It is only through the act of reciting the resurrection passage that these demons would be able to posess the living. For many years, it was thought that this legend-
CHERYL turns off the machine at this point.
SCOTT
Hey, what'd you do that for? It was just getting good.
CHERYL
I just don't want to hear any more that's all.
SCOTT
(Singing) Cheryl's scared, Cheryl's scared.
ASHLY
Scott, leave her alone will ya?
SCOTT
Jesus Christ.
He moves to the tape recorder and fast forewards it for a bit then stops.
SCOTT
She's acting like a baby- it's no big deal.
He turns the machine on. The passage continues.
VOICE
Tantir-ah-mis-trobeen-ha-zar-ta
33 EN - CAB
As the tape plays, all natural sounds from the forest die out, and the autumn colors in the trees fade to a gloomy grey.
34 IN - M.R.
VOICE
Tantir-man-ov-mis-hazen-sober.
All eyes except CHERYL's turn to the window.
35 EN - CAB
Outside, clouds roll in from the east, thunder booms in the distance, and as the wind picks up, it begins to rain.
36 IN - M.R.
VOICE
Kanda!
37 EN - CAB
A section of ground deep within the woods begins to crack, and opens. Smoke seeps out from within, as if some evil force was now being unleashed.
38 IN - M.R.
CHERYL
(In a whisper) Shut it off.
VOICE
Kanda!
39 EN - CAB
The winds howl, and blackbirds fly from their nests, screaming.
40 IN - M.R.
CHERYL
(Louder now) Shut it off.
ASHLY, hearing her for the first time, turns from the window to CHERYL. She is overwhealmed with fear.
VOICE
Kanda!
41 EN - CAB
A bolt of lightning strikes very near and its thunder crash is deafening.
42 IN - M.R.
CHERYL can no longer control herself. She screams and covers her ears.
CHERYL
Shut it offffff!
The window shatters when a branch from a nearby tree tears through it. ASHLY runs to the tape recorder and turns it off. CHERYL is crying now, and runs to her room. ASHLY turns to SCOTT.
ASHLY
Scott, you knew not to play it, I mean...I mean you knew it was upset- ting her. You just don't know when you're carrying something too far.
SCOTT
(To SHELLY) C'mon. (Back to ASHLY) Big deal, it's just a joke, shit.
SCOTT and SHELLY head for their bedroom. SCOTT mumbles to himself along the way.
SCOTT
You'd think she's three years old or something.
SCOTT slams the door behind him. ASHLY sighs. He moves to the broken window and reaches through it to close the outside shutters.
LINDA
He's really been bothering you hasn't he?
ASHLY walks to a chair near the other window.
ASHLY
No. It's not Scott. Scotty's okay. It's just that ever since we came up here, things have been a little too tense. (He sits) All these crazy things going on. And look at that window- we're gonna have to pay for that window now.
LINDA
It'll be better tomorrow. Things'll smooth out, you'll see.
ASHLY
I hope so.
He looks at LINDA lovingly for a long moment.
ASHLY
What'ya say we stay up for a while and listen to the storm.
LINDA
Deal. Lemme check on Cheryl. I'll be right back.
From across the room, she is seen opening CHERYL's door a crack. LINDA asks if she is all right, and gets a muffled reply. In the foreground, ASHLY removes the small box he showed to CHERYL earlier and places it in his hand. He glances behind to LINDA. She closes CHERYL's door and walks back to find ASHLY sound asleep with the box in his hand. She reaches for the box and ASHLY opens his eyes to watch. LINDA looks at him, but his eyes are closed again in time to still appear fast asleep. LINDA turns her attention back to the box. ASHLY watches again wide-eyed as she removes it from his hand. Quickly, LINDA turns to him but as expected, ASHLY is sleeping like a baby. She begins to turn back toward the box and ASHLY opens his eyes, but LINDA turns back again in time to catch him with his eyes wide open.
LINDA
Ah ha!
ASHLY
(Laughing) Stealing from the blind eh? It's for you.
LINDA begins to open the box.
LINDA
It better be good.
The gold necklace is revealed inside.
LINDA
Oh Ash, it's beautiful.
LINDA kisses ASHLY. He removes the necklace from the box and holds it around her neck.
ASHLY
(Fastening it around her neck) I was going to give it to you before we left, but things got so hectic, this is the first chance I've had. Do you like it?
LINDA moves to a mirror.
LINDA
It's beautiful. I really love it. (She turns to ASHLY) I'll never take it off.
43 EN - CAB
Lightning strikes as something in the woods examines the small cottage. Through the outside window, ASHLY and LINDA can be seen embracing. This force watching them moves around the house to another window. The silhouette of SCOTT and SHELLY undressing can be seen. The force continues around and arrives at CHERYL's window. Inside, she brushes her hair in front of the mirror for a moment, then sets down her brush and moves to the window. She stops to uncrumple the sketch drawn earlier, looks at it, then out to the dark woods.
44 IN - C.B.
CHERYL can faintly hear some kind of sound. It is the same sound she had heard earlier from the cellar. A noise almost like that of something breathing.
45 EN - CAB
The evil entity rounds the corner of the cabin as CHERYL walks through the rooms to the front door. She can be seen stepping out the door. It closes behind her. Wind shaking the tree branches sends dead leaves fluttering about.
CHERYL
(Calling to the woods) Is anybody out there?
There is no answer. CHERYL steps away from the cottage toward the woods.
46 EN - W
The breeze animates her nightgown and it too seems alive. CHERYL stops.
CHERYL
I know someone's out there...I heard you...I heard you in the cellar.
Suddenly, CHERYL becomes chilled. She folds her arms around herself and stands at the woods edge, listening. There is only darkness and sounds of the evening wind blowing through the trees. CHERYL steps into the forest a few feet then stops. A cry deep within the woods can be heard. She freezes. Whispering in the distance grows somewhat louder and a soft wail is heard- like that of something long since dead, dredged up to roam the earth again. CHERYL is about to turn back toward the cabin when a rustling comes from a group of trees about twenty yards behind her. She stops. No sound. Nothing moves. Several yards to her left a twig snaps suddenly. She turns but there is silence again. The winds die down, leaving a deathly stillness throughout the woods. Then, all at once, the entire forest becomes alive in a flurry of chaotic noises and movement. Snake-like vines wrap around her ankles and slither up her legs. Tree branches near by begin to claw and rake at her. The force is now moving through the woods toward her. CHERYL is able to break the vines and run toward the cabin. She emerges from the woods and into the clearing. The force is still following.
47 EN - CAB
CHERYL reaches the cabin door but it is locked. She begins pounding upon the door.
CHERYL
Help, help, let me in. Open the door!
The evil entity now emerges from the woods.
CHERYL
Ashly! Linda! Open up!
CHERYL spots the small key ring above the door where SHELLY had returned them earlier. One by one, she fran- tically jams one key after another into the lock, but still cannot find the right one. The force comes closer with each key.
CHERYL
Please, someone please! Help me, help meeeee!
The evil entity is almost upon her, but her actions are so frantic that the ring falls to the ground. She bends down to pick them up, but a hand grabs her arm. It is SCOTT who has opened the door from the inside. She pushes him in the door and slams it tightly.
48 IN - M.R.
SCOTT
What the hell happ-
CHERYL
(In hysterics) It...it tried to kill me. I, I heard a noise and...and I ran and the trees...the trees!
SCOTT
What are you-
He is cut off by ASHLY approaching with the others.
ASHLY
Cheryl what's wrong with you? Did something in the woods do this to you?
CHERYL
No, no, no...the woods themselves- The trees- they're alive...
She hugs ASHLY tightly and cries in hysterical sobs.
CHERYL
They're alive...
LINDA
Ash, why don't I take her into the bedroom so she can lie down a little-
CHERYL
(Cutting her off) -I'm not lying down! I'm not staying here. We're leaving this place, we're leaving this place right now!
SCOTT
Wait a minute, I'm sure as hell not going anywhere.
SHELLY
Cheryl-
ASHLY
Cheryl, there's nothing out there. Trees do not attack people.
CHERYL
Ashly, will you drive me into town or not?
ASHLY
(Looking at his watch) Right Now? (He realizes how desperate she is) Sure, sure I'll drive you into town. But if you'll just listen to what you're saying, you-
CHERYL
I don't care how it sounds. I want to leave this minute. You can bring back my things when you go.
ASHLY
Okay- if you don't want to stay, I can't make you.
LINDA puts a coat around CHERYL as ASHLY helps her to the door.
49 EN - CAB
ASHLY and CHERYL move to the car. ASHLY helps CHERYL in then then gets in the drivers side.
50 IN - CAR
CHERYL
I'll stay some place in town tonight.
ASHLY tries to start the car. There is no response. CHERYL becomes somewhat worried. ASHLY tries again. The car will not turn over. A look of dread comes across CHERYL's face.
51 EN - CAB
SCOTT and the others join the two outside.
52 IN - CAR
CHERYL
It's not gonna start.
ASHLY again tries the engine.
CHERYL
I know it's not gonna start. It's not gonna let us leave.
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ASHLY keys the engine and it turns over this time, start- ing up with a roar. ASHLY, worried by CHERYL's condition glances over to her. Confused and upset, CHERYL turns away from ASHLY and looks out her window. They drive off into the night through the wooded mountains toward town. ASHLY glances at CHERYL who is studying the forest in- tensely for any sign of movement. The concern for his sister is made obvious by the expression on his face. Their car approaches the narrow bridge area and slows down.
CHERYL
Why are you slowing down?
ASHLY brings the car to a halt.
CHERYL
What is this?
ASHLY's gaze is fixed directly ahead, and his mouth opens slowly. He flips on the high beams which stab through the evening mist.
53 EN - B
The bridge over the chasm has been torn away. CHERYL is silent as ASHLY walks to the ravine's edge to examine any remains.
54 IN - CAR
CHERYL
(Mumbling to herself) No, no, no, no, no...it's not going to let us leave, it's not going to let us go...it's not gonna let us gooooo!
55 EN - CAB
An axe is raised into the air, then brought down smash- ing upon a log, splitting it in two. SCOTT is chopping wood outside the cabin. Behind him, through a window, CHERYL sits with a cup of tea in her hand watching him. SCOTT sets his axe down, gathers the wood and moves away. CHERYL shifts her gaze from SCOTT to the woods beyond. The camera moves in toward CHERYL then past her to SHELLY and LINDA who can be seen playing cards on the floor. ASHLY is seated near the fireplace with the tape recorder in front of him. He plugs an earphone in so only he can hear it. SCOTT enters the cabin and passes in front of ASHLY to drop his wood to one side of the fireplace. He throws a log in, and heads back outside.
56 IN - M.R.
From inside, LINDA speaks.
LINDA
Cheryl, wanna play some cards?
CHERYL
(Turning with a smile) Uh-uh.
CHERYL turns to face the window again.
LINDA
Hey, tomorrow morning, we'll find some way around that cliff into town okay?
CHERYL
Okay.
Outside the window, SCOTT chops more wood for the nights fire. ASHLY turns on the tape recorder to listen with the ear plug.
VOICE
March 12th. Suzanne came after me and almost murdered me. My own wife. At first I thought it was a mental or physical disorder because of what had happened to her eyes, but I was only fooling myself. I knew what it was.
Outside the window, SCOTT continues to chop and gather wood. SHELLY, still engaged in cards with LINDA, holds up one in particular.
SHELLY
Okay, guess this card.
LINDA
How am I going to know what card that is?
SHELLY
Guess, I'm going to see if you're psychic.
The card is a two of clubs.
LINDA
Okaaaay...is it a queen?
SHELLY
Right!
LINDA
Really?
SHELLY
Yeah.
LINDA
Hey Ash, I guessed the card right.
ASHLY
(indifferently) Truly amazing Linda.
He is listening intently to the log as it continues.
VOICE
Three days have passed since that thing has been down there. I was hop- ing to weaken it without food or water. Nothing worked. Finally, in desperation I dragged her out to the shed and dismembered her so that what- ever it was could not get up again.
SHELLY
Cheryl, did you see that?
CHERYL remains with her back to them staring out the window.
SHELLY
Try this one.
She removes a nine of clubs from the deck and holds it up.
LINDA
Okay, lemme think, uh...
She puts her hands to her head in a curved funnel form- ation as if to direct her thoughts to the card.
LINDA
...Um, it's a seven.
SHELLY
Oh my God, what suit?
LINDA
Diamonds, no wait! I mean hearts!
SHELLY
That's right- seven of hearts!
LINDA
Hey Ash, did you see that? I guessed two cards in a row.
ASHLY
(Still not paying attention) How do you do it Linda?
He is concentrating on the tape.
VOICE
This is when I saw the dark figures moving about in the woods. I should have never tampered with the "Book Of The Dead." I now know that what- ever it is I have resurrected through this book, is coming for me.
LINDA
You know, I always thought I had some sort of extra sense. You know, like e.s.p or something.
SHELLY
What's this one?
She holds up the queen of spades.
LINDA
Another seven!
SHELLY
I don't believe it!
CHERYL
(Still looking outside) Queen of spades.
SHELLY looks at her card then back to CHERYL. She holds up another card.
CHERYL
Four of hearts.
The card is a four of hearts. SHELLY bites her lip in fear and reaches for another card. ASHLY and LINDA listen in silence.
CHERYL
Eight of spades.
SHELLY picks up the card. CHERYL is correct again.
CHERYL
Two of spades- jack of diamonds- jack of clubs-
Faster and faster she calls them off. Even before SHELLY can flip them to keep up. Suddenly, CHERYL turns toward the group. Her eyes are bone white. SHELLY's deck of cards slip from her hand and scatter across the floor. CHERYL's body is hoisted up to its feet and jerked about like a white-eyed marionette. She speaks in a voice un- like her own.
CHERYL
Why have you disturbed our sleep, awakened us from our ancient slum- ber? You will die. Like the others before you. We will take you one by one. All of you ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-
She screams in a low gruff voice and collapses to the floor.
ASHLY
Oh my God, Shelly, get Scott in here!
SHELLY does not respond.
ASHLY
Hurry!
She exits through the front door. LINDA moves to CHERYL and lifts her head gently. CHERYL appears unconcious but behind her, she reaches for a pen.
LINDA
Did you see her eyes? I'm scared. What's wrong with her?
ASHLY begins to speak when SCOTT and SHELLY enter.
SCOTT
What happened to her?
CHERYL's hand clutches the pen tightly.
LINDA
Look at her eyes.
SCOTT's hand reaches for CHERYL's eyes to inspect them, but they blink open. The pen in her hand races upward, then slashes down, ripping into LINDA's achilles tendon. LINDA screams fiercely and with a blur, the bloodied pen is raised again. ASHLY grabs CHERYL's arm stopping her, but with a powerful swipe, she swings her remaining arm at LINDA who is sent sprawling across the cabin floor. CHERYL then clutches ASHLY and, almost lifting him, sends his body reeling across the room into a book- case which topples over, trapping him beneath its weight. SHELLY stands screaming as CHERYL now advances toward ASHLY's face with the bloody pen. He struggles to pull himself out but cannot. CHERYL is almost upon him when SCOTT grabs her from behind. Effortlessly, she tosses him off and moves toward ASHLY again. SCOTT climbs to his feet and grabs the axe. CHERYL raises the pen above ASHLY's face, and SCOTT gives her a sharp jab in the jaw with the wooden handle. CHERYL stumbles past LINDA and falls backwards, head first into the cellar. She begins to climb out but SCOTT slams the trap door shut upon her hand. It won't close. CHERYL starts to push the trap door open from below. SCOTT climbs on top and is almost thrown off until he viciuosly rams the butt of his axe down upon her protruding hand. Demented screams and moans are heard from below as CHERYL's hand is finally pulled back and SCOTT manages to secure the chain across the hatch.
57 IN - LB
Later that evening, LINDA is seen in her bed, sleeping. ASHLY covers her with a blanket, kisses her, and walks to the door, closing it quietly behind him.
58 IN - M.R.
ASHLY joins SCOTT and SHELLY who sit near the fire in the main room. From the cellar, strange moans, sobs and laughter emerge, then horrible rasping sounds from CHERYL's breathing. Through the next sequence of dialogue, her breathing becomes louder then somewhat quiet.
SCOTT
She'll be okay Ash, she just took a bad bump.
ASHLY
(Quietly) Yeah.
SCOTT and SHELLY listen to the strange noises from below as ASHLY looks out the window to the woods beyond.
ASHLY
We've still got a few hours before morning.
SHELLY
I don't know if I can wait that long.
SCOTT
You have to. We all have to. Then, once it's light out, we'll try to find a way to get around that chasm.
SHELLY
(Covering her ears) Why does she keep making those horrible noises?
ASHLY
I don't know.
SHELLY
And what about her eyes?
ASHLY and SCOTT are quiet.
SHELLY
What about her eyes? (Desperately) For God's sake what happened to her eyes?!
CHERYL patiently sits in the cellars darkness with a streak of light across her eyes from the crack in the trap door. Her head is slightly tilted as she watches and listens to what is said above. From her point of view we hear SCOTT speak to SHELLY.
SCOTT
Everything's gonna be all right.
CHERYL's lips part slightly and a thick blackish yellow liquid drools out between her teeth. She grins.
59 EN - CAB
Outside, the forest is very dark. The unseen force moves from the wooded area, pushing over small trees and shrubs as it advances. The cottage comes into view and the evil entity glides up to it. The figure of a girl in the cabin window can be seen looking out. The force stops and moves behind a bush.
60 IN - M.R.
Inside, SHELLY is studying the woods.
SHELLY
Scotty, I...I think there's some- thing out there.
SCOTT joins her at the window and looks out.
61 EN - CAB
From within the woods, this force watches SCOTT peer out, but he can see nothing. Through the window he says some- thing to reassure SHELLY and moves away.
62 IN - M.R.
Inside, SCOTT can be heard in mid sentence.
SCOTT
...Is to get some rest. Ash and I can stay up with Cheryl.
SHELLY
Okay.
SCOTT
Everything's gonna be okay. Come morning- you'll see.
SHELLY heads to her bedroom. SCOTT walks back to the fireplace and sits. He slices twigs from a branch with the Sumarian dagger and tosses them into the fire. ASHLY glances at the Book Of The Dead, then to the old clock. It stands silent.
63 EN - CAB
Again, the evil entity watches from outside. It sees SHELLY leave one room and turn the lights on in another. She begins to undress near the window. The force now moves from behind its cover and rushes at tremendous speed to SHELLY who is looking out her bedroom window. She sees it and sheer terror covers her face as a scream stifles itself in her throat, but it is too late.
64 IN - M.R.
A noise is heard from SHELLY's bedroom. SCOTT drops the small stick he was whittling and looks up. He places the dagger on the floor and walks toward SHELLY's room.
SCOTT
Shelly, are you okay?
She does not answer. SCOTT approaches her door and turns to ASHLY.
SCOTT
Keep an eye on Cheryl for a minute.
65 IN - S.B.
SCOTT enters the darkness of her room and sees nothing amidst the shadows.
SCOTT
Shelly?
He looks over to her window. It is open, and wind blows upon the curtains.
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66 IN - S. BATH
SCOTT steps into SHELLY's bathroom and sees that the shower curtain is drawn. Cautiously, he moves up to it.
SCOTT
Shelly?
He pulls the curtain back to reveal an empty tub. SCOTT turns back to the bedroom when SHELLY steps into the doorway, posessed. With a scream, she latches upon SCOTT. Her eyes have gone bone white and she claws at SCOTT's face and clothes with her nails.
67 IN - S.B.
Screaming, SCOTT stumbles through her bedroom with SHELLY still upon him biting at his throat.
68 IN - M.R.
They stagger into the main room where SCOTT manages to knock SHELLY off himself and into the fireplace. She remains motionless as her head smolders upon the hot coals. SCOTT rushes to her, grabs an arm and pulls her out. SHELLY's face and hair on one side of her head are seared and blackened. She blinks her eyes open, turns her charred head to SCOTT, and speaks in a rasp.
SHELLY
Thank you. I don't know what I would have done if I had remained on the hot coals burning my pretty flesh. You have pretty skin- give it to us!
Cackling, SHELLY clutches SCOTT's neck and begins throttl- ing the life out of him with a vice-like grip. He tries to break the hold but cannot. ASHLY also tries but with a backhand blow, SHELLY knocks him into a cabinet, smash- ing it to bits. A garbled cry for help escapes from SCOTT's frothing mouth. SHELLY reaches down, picks up the Sumarian dagger, and holding SCOTT by his throat with one hand, she raises the dagger with the other. ASHLY, slightly injured, crawls to his feet. SCOTT grabs her raised arm and although choking, swings his camping knife from its side sheath and slices deep into SHELLY's raised wrist, almost severing it. A murky black ooze pumps from the wound. She emits an ear splitting- howl and tightens her grip on SCOTT's throat. He drops the hunting knife. ASHLY watches terrified, unable to move as SHELLY raises her dangling hand (Still clutching the dagger) to her mouth and bites it off. The useless part falls to the floor with the dagger still firmly in its fist. SCOTT, now almost dead, grabs her severed hand clutching the dagger and in a last attempt, swings it around ramming the blade into her spine.
SHELLY screetches along with CHERYL in the cellar, the old grandfather clock gongs and lightning strikes all at the same instant. SHELLY reaches around with her remaining arm to clutch at the severed hand and knife protruding from her own back. A thick black ooze pours from the wound as she bends backward screaming. ASHLY stands in horror, clutching the axe, unable to move. Black ooze runs from SHELLY's mouth as her body writhes about spasmatically upon the floor. Gradually, the move- ments cease and she is dead. As SCOTT slowly stands to his feet, SHELLY's arm grabs his leg.
SCOTT
Ahhhhhhh!
Some force reanimates her, even though the body is dead.
ASHLY
No...no...no...
SCOTT
Hit her!
SHELLY's body is hoisted up, jerking about to its feet, and laughing madly.
SCOTT
Hit it!
SCOTT screams this as he backs toward ASHLY who stands with the axe, paralyzed. Gurgling black ooze, SHELLY advances toward them with one remaining arm. SCOTT grabs the axe from ASHLY, pushes him away and slams it into her. Lightning flashes, thunder booms, and CHERYL screams from the cellar. SCOTT brings his axe down again and again in a frenzy. Then, after the final chop, there is silence.
SHELLY's body remains on the floor for quite some time- until ASHLY can cope with the fact that she is dead and something must be done.
ASHLY
Uh...Scott.
SCOTT
Yeah.
ASHLY
What is uh...what are we gonna do?
SCOTT
Bury her.
ASHLY
You...can't bury Shelly. She's a friend of ours isn't she?
SCOTT
Ash, she's dead.
ASHLY moves away from SCOTT.
SCOTT
Shelly's dead. We're gonna bury her now.
ASHLY bites his lip and looks about blankly.
69 EN - CAB
Finally, the body is dragged outside and buried near the work shed. Harsh floodlights from the house make the task look very stark and barren.
70 IN - M.R.
SCOTT and ASHLY return inside. ASHLY heads to LINDA's room to check in on her.
71 IN - L.B.
He peers in to see LINDA sleeping peacefully.
72 IN - M.R.
ASHLY quietly returns to the main room. SCOTT is load- ing new batteries into a flashlight.
SCOTT
I saw an old hiking trail when we were driving up here. Now I don't know if it goes all the way around that gorge-
ASHLY
-Or if it's even still in tact.
SCOTT
Or if it's even still in tact. But uh, I guess I'll find out. Take good care of Linda.
ASHLY
I will. Do you have everything?
SCOTT
(Putting on a small back pack) Yeah- all set.
ASHLY
Listen...Scotty...I'm sorry about falling apart like that when-
SCOTT
Don't bother, really.
He steps out the door.
SCOTT
If I find a way out of here, I'll mark it and then come back. Then if I'm not back here in a few hours... if for some reason...well, if I don't come back, grab Linda, leg and all, and just get her the hell out of here.
They shake hands.
ASHLY
You're a good man.
SCOTT
Good, I'm the best.
73 EN - CAB
ASHLY smiles a good-bye to SCOTT and watches him move off into the night. He lingers for a moment by SHELLY's grave, then slowly disappears into the woods.
74 IN - M.R.
ASHLY closes the door and turns back to the main room. He sees CHERYL's eyes through the crack in the cellar. She has been watching all of this through a space be- tween the trap door and floor. ASHLY walks past her to LINDA's room.
75 IN - L.B.
He opens the door and a crack of light falls across her. LINDA wakes up.
LINDA
Who's there? Ash?
ASHLY
It's me Linda.
LINDA
Ash, I had a bad dream about Linda.
ASHLY
You did baby?
LINDA
Yeah. She's all right isn't she?
ASHLY
Yeah. Fine.
LINDA
Is Shelly okay too Ash?
ASHLY can no longer hide his fear and anxiety. He speaks in a whisper so as not to let his voice quiver.
ASHLY
Yeah, sure. She's sleeping that's all.
LINDA
Ash, I love you. (She turns over)
ASHLY
Get some rest.
ASHLY closes the door behind him and the fear from a few hours ago engulfs him once more.
76 IN - M.R.
ASHLY moves into the main room and stops dead in his tracks when a voice in the cellar speaks.
CHERYL
You lied to her. You lied to Linda. Shelly's not sleeping. She's dead. Don't you know the difference? You killed her. You and Scott cut her up with the axe. She's dead ha-ha-ha-ha- ha-ha-
ASHLY picks up the axe and slams it down upon the trap door. CHERYL is silent from below for a moment, then the hatch opens an inch or so. (The length of the chain securing it) CHEYL's white eyes can be seen again.
CHERYL
Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-
ASHLY takes the axe and steps outside.
77 EN - CAB
He begins to chop wood, taking out his emotions upon the logs with each blow. SHELLY's blood can still be seen on the blade of the axe.
78 IN - M.R.
From her dungeon, CHERYL watches ASHLY chop wood in the window. The shadow of his axe rising then striking is seen over her white eyes.
79 EN - CAB
Exhausted, ASHLY puts down the axe. He looks off into the woods but there is no sign of SCOTT. He returns to the cabin.
80 IN - M.R.
CHERYL begins her taunting again.
CHERYL
Soon all of you will be like me and then who will lock you in the cellar? Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-
CHERYL begins to violently ram her fists against the trap door. ASHLY walks by her to LINDA's room.
81 IN - L.B.
She is still asleep. Quietly, so as not to wake her, ASHLY pulls back her blanket exposing the bandaged leg. He re- moves the wrappings and looks at the wound. As he does this, it infects with a blackened coloration at an in- credible speed. ASHLY looks up to see if LINDA is still sleeping and sees that she has been watching him with white eyes and an evil grimace upon her face. She lets out a low growl.
82 IN - M.R.
ASHLY jolts backwards out of her room to escape through the front door. He steps outside and stops to look back in. He can see the main room, but finds it difficult to see in LINDA's room, being lost in the shadows. Something ragged and bloody grabs him. It is SCOTT's mutilated body ripped and torn to shreds. He is still alive. ASHLY looks behind him through the door to LINDA's room. He can barely make out LINDA who sits on the bed watching him with glaring white eyes. ASHLY helps SCOTT to the couch so he can sit. SCOTT is in agony and can barely speak.
SCOTT
Ash, I think I'm dying. Jesus, I can't feel my legs.
ASHLY
Uh...uh Scotty you're gonna be okay. You're gonna be just fine- you'll see.
He throws another log on the fire.
ASHLY
You'll see.
He looks off into LINDA's bedroom again, but she is gone. She is now sitting in the corner of the main room where ASHLY is, watching him. SCOTT begins to cough with hor- rible rasping sounds.
SCOTT
It's, it's not gonna let us leave... Cheryl...Cheryl was right...we're all gonna die here...
ASHLY
We're not gonna die!
SCOTT
...All gonna die. All of us.
ASHLY grabs SCOTT and shakes him violently.
ASHLY
We're not gonna die! We're not gonna die! We're getting out of here! Now listen to me- is there a way around the chasm.
SCOTT passes out.
ASHLY
Scotty. Scott!
ASHLY slaps SCOTT. He stirs awake and mumbles.
SCOTT
Jesus Ash. I don't want to die. So... so lonely to die like this. You're not gonna leave me are you? Are you Ash?
CHERYL
(Imitating SCOTT) I don't want to die. So lonely to die like this. You're not gonna leave me are you? Are you Ash? Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-
ASHLY
Scott, is there some way around the chasm?
SCOTT
Ash, I'm scared- I...I can't feel my legs.
ASHLY
Scott, listen to me please, for God's sake. Is there a way around the chasm?
SCOTT
There is...one way, the trail...but the trees, they know...don't you see- they're alive!! They're ali-ahhhhhhh!
His sentence is cut short as he cries out in sharp pain. Blood dribbles from his nostrils and he doubles over grabbing his stomach. LINDA begins to laugh. ASHLY looks to her, or rather what posesses her with hatred.
ASHLY
Shut up!
She continues to laugh. CHERYL in the cellar joins in the laughter. ASHLY walks to LINDA and slaps her but she continues. He grabs a hunting rifle from a rack on the wall, loads it with shells, flips off the safety and places the barrels against LINDA's head.
ASHLY
God forgive me Linda.
The laughter stops and her eyes return to normal. It is LINDA again. ASHLY puts down the rifle.
LINDA
Ash, oh Ash, help Me! Please.
She hugs him tightly.
LINDA
Don't let them take me away again, please, please, please.
ASHLY
(Crying and holding her tightly) I won't, I won't- I promise.
CHERYL's voice is heard from the blackness of the cellar.
CHERYL
Ashly? Ashly, help me. Let me out of here. I'm all right now.
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ASHLY releases LINDA and moves cautiously to the cellar. LINDA remains behind nervously fumbling with her necklace.
CHERYL
I'm all right now, Ashly. I'm all right. Come unlock this chain and let me out.
ASHLY
Cheryl?
There is no reply from the cellar. ASHLY looks through the crack but sees only darkness. He reaches for the chain and begins to unlock it, but sensing something wrong, he stops.
ASHLY
Cheryl?
He puts his ear to the floor listening for the slight- est sound. CHERYL's arms rip through the floor boards and grab ASHLY's head. He breaks away and her hand reaches for the chain but cannot quite grasp it. Slowly it withdraws beneath the floor.
CHERYL
(A little too sweet) Ash, what are you doing? This is your sister Cheryl. Don't you recognize me?
Her voice drifts off, and the evil leughter resumes from the celler.
ASHLY
(Crying and yelling to the cellar) You bastards! Why are you doing this? Why?
There is silence for a moment. Laughter from behind him begins again. It is LINDA. Her eyes are white once more, and she laughs at ASHLY.
ASHLY
Oh...Linda.
With newly found courage, ASHLY angrily grabs LINDA by the legs and drags her outside.
83 EN - CAB
LINDA
It's useless, useless, useless. In time we'll come for him, then you ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-
ASHLY leaves her in the woods and runs back to the cabin, closing the door behind him.
84 IN - M.R.
SCOTT is coughing again.
SCOTT
Ash, Ash, please...I don't want to die- but...but I can't stand this pain. It hurts Ash. Gimme something. Gimme something to put me out.
ASHLY
Scott, I can't. I- I know it's bad. But I can't be alone now, I can't. I'd lose my mind.
SCOTT
Please Ash, please.
ASHLY
You'll get better- you'll see.
LINDA's laughter is faintly heard outside. ASHLY moves to the window and pulls back the curtain. LINDA is no longer in the woods but sitting at the edge of the clear- ing, watching ASHLY with her glowing white eyes.
ASHLY
Yeah, tomorrow, soon, you'll be better and we'll both get out of here tomorrow.
SCOTT
There is no tomorrow! You- you've got to kill her and cut- cut her up- your sister too.
ASHLY
No, that was only with Shelly. You had to with Shelly. You- Linda loves me. You're delirious- I...I'll get you some water.
ASHLY places a glass to Scott's lips.
ASHLY
Now, now the sun will be up in an hour or so and we'll get out of here ...together. You, me, Linda, Shelly- n-no not Shelly, she- we'll all go home together. Wouldn't you like to be going home? You'd like that I'd bet, wouldn't ya?
There is no answer from SCOTT. The water runs out of his mouth.
ASHLY
...Scott.
SCOTT is dead. LINDA's laughter is heard again. ASHLY walks to the window and pulls back the curtain. There is nothing there. He turns and she is there! With the Sumarian dagger, LINDA rips into ASHLY's shirt, cutting his arm. He screams and watches in horror as she runs her tongue over the dagger, licking the blood from it. She turns her attention toward ASHLY again but he grabs her and they struggle. LINDA backs ASHLY up against SCOTT, knocking his body to the floor. CHERYL's gnarled arm reaches up through the broken floor boards and grabs at ASHLY's foot. He manages to turn LINDA's arm so the knife is behind her back. Forcefully, ASHLY pushes her over the body of SCOTT and she falls back- ward upon the dagger, impaling herself upon it. The blade tears into her back and rips through her stomach. Lightning flashes, thunder roars, and LINDA screams in a deep growl once, then all is quiet.
ASHLY drags LINDA's corpse past the crumpled body of SCOTT, past CHERYL, who watches all of this from below, through the back door and out to the work shed.
85 IN - W.S.
He lifts her up onto the work bench and secures her body to it with a number of chains which hang from nails along the wall. He rips down a tarp hanging on the wall to reveal a chain saw. He starts it up and moves toward her. Buzzing madly, the saw is lowered to a position several inches above LINDA's neck. ASHLY looks into LINDA's face. Her eyes have gone back to blue. He turns off the saw.
ASHLY
(In a whisper) Linda...
He drops the saw and breaks down crying over LINDA's body.
86 EN - CAB
An evening mist drifts out of the woods and cloaks the shed as ASHLY carries LINDA's body outside for burial. He lays the body upon the ground and picks up a shovel. Harsh floodlights from the corners of the cabin create strange shadows on the ground as ASHLY digs LINDA's grave. She lies on her back during the digging. One of her eyes opens. It is white. ASHLY drops the shovel and looks at her. She appears to be dead.
87 IN - M.R.
Inside the cabin, CHERYL begins slamming her fists against the trap door in the cellar again. She wants out. The screws holding the hatch in place begin to loosen.
88 EN - CAB
ASHLY places LINDA's corpse in the grave, oblivious to CHERYL's pounding. He begins to cover her with dirt.
89 IN - M.R.
CHERYL has ripped out all but one screw which holds the trap door in tact.
90 EN - CAB
ASHLY glances to the grave and sees LINDA's necklace on top of the dirt mound. He reaches down to pick it up when LINDA's hand shoots up from beneath the grave and grabs him! She pulls herself up out of the grave scream- ing and clutches ASHLY's leg with a black and bloodied hand. He twists around, trying to free himself, but she will not let go. By now, LINDA is almost completely out of the grave. With her fingernails, she rips into ASHLY's leg, tearing his skin. Screaming, he picks up a large log nearby and swings it roundhouse into her face again and again, breaking the wood into smaller bits. She grabs the log with him clinging to the other end, lifts him up and throws ASHLY log and all, away from her. ASHLY hits the ground with considerable force and for the first time begins to comprehend the power of this thing he is dealing with. Thick black ooze pours from LINDA's nose and mouth as she turns toward ASHLY sprawled on the ground.
ASHLY
Stay back.
His hand gropes for the handle of the spade. LINDA advances toward him, laughing.
ASHLY
Linda please, if you can still hear me. Keep away.
His fingers tighten on the wooden handle. With a scream, she lunges toward him. From the ground, ASHLY swings the spade upward, lopping off her head. The head falls into the mud, but the body falls upon him, grabbing and jerk- ing about spasmatically. Thick black ooze pumps from her neck and ASHLY manages to pull himself out from underneath the body. He backs away in disgust and falls. He picks himself up again and sees LINDA's necklace upon the ground. ASHLY stashes it in his pocket and staggers back to the cabin.
91 IN - M.R.
Inside, he looks to the main room beyond SCOTT's body.
ASHLY
Oh.....
It is a moan from deep inside him. The trap door is open and CHERYL is gone. ASHLY walks over and kicks it shut. A slight breeze sweeps through the front door causing SHELLY's bedroom door to creak open. ASHLY picks up the rifle again and cautiously moves to the door.
92 IN - S.B.
He enters. The room is dark and the closet door bangs back and forth because of the breeze. ASHLY moves toward it, grabs the handle and slowly opens the door. Only clothes are inside. He turns toward the other end of the room and CHERYL pops up in the window right by him. He swings and fires, shattering the window. CHERYL backs away and spots the open front door.
ASHLY
The door...
He makes a mad dash through SHELLY's room.
93 IN - M.R.
In the main room, ASHLY races for the door.
94 EN - CAB
Outside, CHERYL is almost upon the door.
95 IN - MR
ASHLY arrives in time, but CHERYL has already started reaching in. He slams the door on her fingers and rams his gun butt down upon them. Horrible screams are heard as CHERYL withdraws her hand. ASHLY is able to slam the door and bolt it. He runs to the back entrance lead- ing to the shed and locks it also. On his way back to the main room, he pumps his rifle in preparation. It is his last shell.
ASHLY
(To himself) More shells. Where did I see that box of shells?
96 IN - C
From the basement, the trap door lifts open and ASHLY decends. The bottom step, now rotten, breaks under his weight, and ASHLY sprawls to the floor. Slowly, he picks himself up and walks through the dividing stone doorway beneath the water pipes to a small table. On it, he finds the box of shells and quickly loads them into the gun. He ascends the steps and enters the main room once more.
97 IN - M.R.
The sound of ticking catches ASHLY's attention. He looks up to see the old grandfather clock slowly winding back- wards. He watches and waits tensely. Turning carefully, ASHLY tries to monitor all the windows. The ticking grows louder. A shadow passes in the window before him and he fires, shattering the glass into a million pieces. Wind whips through the cabin swirling glass and leaves to the floor. ASHLY waits, leaning against the front door for something to happen. He is tense and more determined than ever to survive. He whispers to himself.
ASHLY
C'mon, c'mon, get it over with, why are you torturing me like this?
Placing his hand to his side, ASHLY discovers something in his pocket. He lifts it to his eyes. It is LINDA's necklace.
ASHLY
...Linda. (He whispers)
The ticking stops. He tilts his head for the slightest sound. All is silent. From behind, two arms rip through the door and grab him. ASHLY tears away and falls to the floor. The necklace is tossed away in the confusion. CHERYL's hands pull away and she looks through a hole in the door. From the floor, ASHLY raises his rifle and fires at her head.
98 EN - CAB
Clutching at her face and screaming horribly, CHERYL is jolted from the door.
99 IN - M.R.
ASHLY places a dresser and chair against the holes in the door. Behind ASHLY, SCOTT's corpse sits up and opens its white eyes. It stands and moves toward ASHLY. He turns with the gun, but SCOTT knocks it out of his hands. Desperately, ASHLY grabs a table lamp and shatters it across SCOTT's head, then jams the exposed socket into his face, shocking him. SCOTT staggers back several steps, then continues after ASHLY.
100 EN - CAB
Outside, Cheryl is now pounding against the front door.
101 IN - M.R.
ASHLY picks up a small table upon which are the Book Of The Dead, and the professors journal. He throws it at SCOTT. This does not affect him, and he advances closer. The Book Of The Dead lands near the fireplace and edges of the paper darken from the heat. SCOTT picks up ASHLY and begins to throttle him as if he were a rag doll. The front door begins to give under CHERYL's pounding. ASHLY brings his hands to SCOTT's eyes. With a crash, CHERYL breaks through the front door and begins to push the dresser away. Pages from the Book Of The Dead are smolder- ing now. ASHLY jams his fingers into SCOTT's eyes and slips from the grip. SCOTT clutches his eye sockets and his back begins to smolder. ASHLY now sees the book. Its pages burn at the edge. CHERYL topples the dresser and enters the room. Her face is partially torn away from the shot gun blast. ASHLY rushes to throw the book onto the burning logs, but CHERYL, smoldering also, gives him a backhand blow across the head, and he is sent sprawling to the floor. She grabs a fireplace poker with her crushed fingers and turns back to ASHLY who is crawl- ing toward the fireplace. When almost in reach of the book, SCOTT grabs his leg and begins to pull ASHLY back- ward. CHERYL approaches with smoke pouring from her clothes and slams ASHLY across the back with her poker. ASHLY screams. A glitter catches his eye. It is LINDA's necklace. Grabbing it, he tosses the end with a clasp toward the book. It slides off the cover. SCOTT pulls him back once more as ASHLY swings the necklace in a last desperate attempt. CHERYL raises the poker for the final blow. The necklace drapes over the book and as ASHLY is dragged, the clasp hooks the cover and pulls the book with him. With a yank, he seizes the book and tosses it upon the blaze.
CHERYL and SCOTT freeze. The Book Of The Dead burns in a bluish green flame. Smoke pours from SCOTT and CHERYL as distant demonical screams are heard from the woods. The fireplace poker slips from CHERYL's hand and sticks into the wood scarcely an inch from ASHLY's head. The bodies of SCOTT and CHERYL then begin to cave inward upon themselves, collapsing to the floor in smoldering heaps. Finally, nothing is left but the burnt clothing and a blackish grey ooze on the floor where their bodies once were.
The old clock begins to tick again, normally. ASHLY slowly climbs to his feet to stand above the fuming debris. Open- ing his hand, he looks down at LINDA's necklace. The force retreats from him, out the door, slowly returning to the darkness from which it emerged. Gradually, the natural sounds of the forest swell and trees lose their gloom as Autumn colors return. The first rays of sunlight gleam over the woods beyond the cabin. Daybreak has finally come.
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